Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

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Dear Peter, My English teacher has given me your name because I am looking for a penfriend, so I am writing to introduce myself. I’m 34 years old, I am married and I live with my wife and son Ouargla, Algeria. I have been working as a mechanical engineer for 8 years. Despite working far away from my home, I really love my job as I have the chance to resolve different kinds of problems every day. I spend most of my free time reading historical and autobiography books, I like to consider myself a keen reader as I read two books every month.

In addition

, I love gaming twice a week, I prefer action-adventure games but I detest shooter games. I

also

do some hiking as I try to go out once twilight to the mountains.

Finally

, I do a lot of DIY , recently I decorated the walls of my living room with wood panels,

time I’ll send some photos. Well, enough from me, Tell me more about yourself and how you keep yourself busy. I would be happy to hear from you in the near future. Until the

time, take care of yourself and your family. Kind regards, Abdelouahab

Submitted by Abdelouahab Charaallah on Sat Dec 18 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Despite better access to education, some adults are not able to read or write. What are the main disadvantages of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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