The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The given pie charts illustrate the
amount
of three different nutrients including sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in percentage in the USA.
Overall
, a glance at the charts reveals that the most significant sector in
two
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the two
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charts is related to
dinner
and it is obvious that the
amount
of added sugar in snacks is by far more than other additives. In the first
chart
, the
dinner
sector compromised
the
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an
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average of 43%, which is the highest
amount
.
Snack
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Snacks
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and breakfast represent the same
amount
of sodium consumption (14%), and for lunch, the average number is 29%. In the
second
chart
, which shows the saturated fat added to
American’s
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American
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meals like the previous
chart
,
dinner
contains the highest
amount
(37%).
Likewise
,
the
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in the
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first
chart
, breakfast ,and
snack
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snacks
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provide less fat respectively 16 and 21 per cent.
Moreover
, lunch shows a lower
amount
of fat just more than a quarter, compared to sodium. The
third
chart
shows the sugar contribution in snacks is significant and nearly twice as the
dinner
sector. Lunch and breakfast made up 19 and 16 per cent of added sugar, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, dinner, chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • balanced diet
  • overconsumption
  • health risks
  • cultural dietary patterns
  • processed foods
  • portion control
  • government regulations
  • nutrition education
  • informed choices
  • saturated fats
  • trans fats
  • carbohydrates
  • sodium intake
  • public health
  • nutrition labels
  • dietary guidelines
  • caloric content
  • food groups
  • obesity
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • diabetes
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