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Many people believe that pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achivement What is your view of examinations?

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All the schools have tests
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 their
last
 semester.
Students
 would like to burn up the midnight oil before the important Examination day. Have you ever thought sides about
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test
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? Some people say that the
test
 is beneficial, some say
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 not good.
First
 of all,
test
 puts
students
 under lots of pressure. Almost all
students
 in school would want to obtain good results as it is crucial for their future. The process before taking the exam makes
students
 already
stressful
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. They think that they need a good grade to get the best job.
Also
its
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 under pressure after knowing the grade. The low marks make
students
 more
pressure
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 and disappointed.
Besides
,
i
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 think examinations can be a waste of time.
This
 is due to the fact that
,
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 some
students
 would work hard to only pass the
test
, not to understand and remember the lesson they have learned. They only memorize just for what they need, not memorizing the things they will need in future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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