In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Nowadays, a nursing

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is becoming popular among older

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as they have nurses to take

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of them and friends to interact

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While some

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argue that the

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should pay for

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, others believe

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has to be paid

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the family. In my opinion,

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the

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and the family should make joint efforts to pay for the

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with, payment for a nursing

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should be paid by

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the

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and the family as they have played a crucial role

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in society and

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the family

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, most senior

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have been working hard to support their family and, by doing that, they

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have been making contributions to societal progress. As a token of appreciation,

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national authority and family members should provide support when older

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need help including financial support for nursing

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care

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clearly explains why

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the

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and the family should pay for nursing

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for seniors. On top of

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, imposing a financial burden on a single source can engender

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. Paying for

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at a nursing

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can be burdensome to

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the

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and the family. The cost involves accommodation, food, carers, and activities, which means that the cost can be overwhelming. If the

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is the only economic source for

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, it will encounter huge financial deficits when there are too many elderly

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asking for nursing

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. The same applies to the family. If they have to pay for the expensive

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for long, they can get into a situation where they have to declare bankruptcy.

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, joint responsibility by the

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and the family can relieve the financial burden by each contributing a partial amount of payment for nursing

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care

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. To sum up,

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the

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and the family should pay for nursing

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care

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for seniors. Not only because elderly

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have made contributions

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to the society and the family but

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financial burden can be eased with joint responsibility, payment for a nursing

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care

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for seniors has to be made by

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the

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and the family