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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference

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Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing you
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 of a favour. As you are aware , our company Dialog Axiata Pvt(ltd) has organized a conference on sales techniques for the future, which is scheduled for Friday, 25th of December at the City Center Hotel. Due to an unavoidable
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 the guest speaker will not be participating . You came to my mind when the conference organizers were about to cancel the event. As a veteran of the sales industry , you would pose a wide horizon of knowledge on the potential trend and have
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exposure to our company culture.
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, in my opinion , you would be the ideal replacement to present among our staff. We can facilitate a pickup and drop
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 on the day of the event.
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, you would be invited to the lunch buffet following the award ceremony in which you will be rewarded with a token of appreciation on behalf of our enterprise. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Best regards, Elmo Rajamani
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