Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Good academic
results
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study
is a hotly-debated
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that some
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that it is more efficient for undergraduates to learn in a set while
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are for the opinion that it is of value for them to read solely.I will elaborate
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views in the paragraph and give my own opinion.
First
of all,team discussions are effective since the learners will be explained
further
on what was not well understood in class from the lecture
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different views from several students make the subjects easy to understand.To illustrate
further
,studying become faster
in other words
time is not wasted searching for
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without getting it.
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several ideas from others that will facilitate
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an answer.
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of group
engagment
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engagement
in schools during studying which is a major development in
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.
Therefore
,it is prudent for
scolars
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scholars
to engage with other students for a good academic class.
Secondly
.reading solely has merits and demerits
however
, there
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scolars
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scholars
who get extremely high
results
by just having private studies.
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contrast
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,it can be boring,
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tiring
and technology
distrations
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distractions
are eventualities we cannot run from.
Moreover
,difficult questions can make a finalist stick to one question long enough;cover very little in the subject.
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,
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studying
study in
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association in
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that 60% of master student
study
privately due to other responsibility they are engaged in.
Therefore
,it is exhausting to
study
alone
such
that to get
results
the learner will require to utilize
alot
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a lot
of time for valuable
results
. To sum up, in my opinion
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grouping of newcomers is more valuable
in contrast
to private
study
such
that there is better feedback from many
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engagement
since learners have different
experties
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expertise
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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