You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the cooling system in your hotel is not working adequately.
Moreover
, I am asking you to change my room where I managed to solve the problem for the few ongoing hours.
First
of all, I just arrived at my chamber yesterday when the weather was currently very hot and unexpected for
such
a season. In fact, I turned the air conditioner and put it in freezing mode
however
, the air produced was not fresh enough. Actually, I tried to call the reception,
although
nobody was answering my calls probably the phones' lines were having some issues.
Then
, I managed to figure out the cause for
this
break after searching the room for a long period. It was the external tube which is blocking the condensated water to flow out from the AC compressor. As result, I am kindly demanding to move into another room and to be fully refunded because of the horrible night that I had on my arrival. I strongly appreciate your comprehension and consideration in
this
delicate matter. yours faithfully, Ali Hammoud
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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