You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

#qualification #time #work #manager #job #company #addresses

Dear MR Smith, I am one of your employees who is working for your company for about two years . Actually, I am writing

this

letter to take some days off as I have some classes to increase my knowledge which are related to my job and I

also

want to raise my experience in the field that I have been working on it since two months ago. If you give me

this

chance, I can do my work in a better way and after my ,exams I can stay longer to deliver all of my papers which are on my shoulders on time .

Moreover

, I will bring my duties to my home and work at night. I hope you understand my situation and I promise to do my job on time . I looking forward to receiving your permission and I will really appreciate it. Yours Faithfully, Sara Ahmadi

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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