Some people think that criminal activities can be reduced by giving prisoners a better education inside the prison and they can get a job when they leave prison. To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree?
Some people believe that providing
criminals
with access to educational courses and training programmes might improve the chance of these offenders to have a better life after prison. Use synonyms
This
essay agrees with the idea because it helps Linking Words
prisoners
to acquire skills that can support their life financially and the process of learning and training can foster the rehabilitation of these Use synonyms
criminals
.
One reason for providing education inside prisons is that it gives Use synonyms
criminals
practical skills and hands-on experiences. Use synonyms
Thus
, after serving their sentences, they can apply for jobs in the market, so it saves their time from learning and practising. Linking Words
Consequently
, it not only provides them with financial benefits but Linking Words
also
reduces burdens on their family members who are responsible for taking care of these offenders after jail. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
prisoners
in Vietnam are allowed to take courses in computer science, electrical engineering, and business management, so most of them after their custodial sentences are qualified to work in these domains.
Another reason to facilitate educating Use synonyms
prisoners
is that it can rehabilitate them. Because learning and practising require social communication and the obligation of maintaining proper interactions among these Use synonyms
prisoners
, so it can be a positive transition for them before getting back into society. For Use synonyms
this
reason, they may learn how to care about people and take responsibility for their actions like a normal citizen. Linking Words
For instance
, teaching a theft about business may help him to understand the value of good and how hard it is made, so he can appreciate people's working effort and decide to stop doing misdeeds.
In conclusion, providing courses inside prison teaches valuable skills for offenders to be ready for jobs and it Linking Words
also
supports the rehabilitation of these Linking Words
prisoners
, so I, Use synonyms
therefore
, believe that better education should be given to Linking Words
criminals
in jail.Use synonyms
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