More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

There are many people in over the world particularly in developing countries have tried to find better
oppotunities
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opportunities
in other urban areas.
However
, it is undeniable that there are huge challenges for living in
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those
the
cities
such
as
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barrier and living
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.
Therefore
, Officials should provide some facilities
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make immigrants
life
better. In
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the
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paragraph, some
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difficulties
of living in the urban district and solutions will be explained.
Initially
, It is
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obvious
that the biggest difficulty for refugees who
migrating
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to
the
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new
cities
is a language barrier.
For instance
, The Immigration Organisation shows the report that many
foreigers
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foreigners
struggle with understanding the new
landguage
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language
such
as finding their job, obtaining a driver's licence which is required special and specific
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linguistic
linguistics
.
Moreover
, the report
also
illustrates that
new comer
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find
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the
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huge challenge in living
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because
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cost
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face
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, it is clear that the
cost
of living in the city is higher than living in the rural area.
Furthermore
, they need to live together
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cheapest
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price creating stressful and
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kiosk
environments. From
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, moving to the
cities
has many
dificulties
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difficulties
, even there are better
oppotunities
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opportunities
Therefore
,
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are some solutions that authorities can provide to these people.
First
, providing discounts for living
cost
policy for the
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newcomer
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new comer
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newcomer
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.
This
can help new immigrants find their
life
much easier,
such
as finding low-rental
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apartment
.
Then
, the officials should provide some translation
service
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services
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for
foreigers
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foreigners
in special tasks.
For example
, the Immigrants Organisation in Japan showed that since they have
provide
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english
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translation services in a driver licence test and a job
recruiment
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recruitment
form, the foreigners found
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convenient in
applying
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the job or taking the test. From these solutions and some supporting evidence, the
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life
will be more efficient. In conclusion,
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there
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are many difficulties in moving to
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new
cities
such
as
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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with language and
high
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the high
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cost
of living.
Therefore
, the governments should provide some facilities that help these citizens
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example,
provinding
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providing
the living-
cost
discount and the translation
sevices
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services
to
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help
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the immigrant's
life
better.
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