Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

University
subjects
are very debatable. Some people consider that all
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
university
students
should opt
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
what they want to
study
. While the
others
think that they should only
study
the
subjects
are thought more beneficial for the future,
such
as linking to science and technology.
This
essay will discuss both views of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why
students
'
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
choices are superior. In my opinion,the
first
approach is right. Universities have lots of
subjects
and faculties from science and technology to humanitarian
subjects
. Not all
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
people have the same interest area.
For example
, some
students
prefer to be a painter, some choose
being
Change the verb form
to be
show examples
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
language teacher while
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
others
want to be an engineer. They cannot be
tought
Correct your spelling
taught
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
identical
subjects
.As we see from examples, telling
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
students
what they have to choose to
study
is meaningless.
In contrast
to
this
, we will have more useful professions in future but less
curiousity
Correct your spelling
curiosity
in
Change preposition
about
show examples
those humans' work.
In
Change preposition
On
show examples
the other hand,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
others
believe that
students
should only
allowed
Change the verb form
be allowed
show examples
to learn science or technology related
subject
Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
show examples
. It is certainly clear those
subjects
are becoming more and more popular. But it does not mean that except
these
Change preposition
for these
show examples
branches, the
others
are useless. If all humans were forced to
study
the same
subjects
, the other fields of need in the world would be completely empty. As I have discussed, there are different approaches to the question.
However
, I think only
students
themselves are responsible for their future and their
interes
Correct your spelling
interest
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
subjects
.
Submitted by ulkerh999 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
What to do next:
Look at other essays: