It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children do many things from birth, and the acts may be correct or incorrect based on the knowledge they possess and their age. Some adults feel that

punishment

is the right

approach

to educate toddlers to do everything right, else it will become harder to teach them when

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up. I contradict

this

statement and provide alternative approaches to harsh penalties in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin

with, while growing

kids

execute a number of tasks and it is a persistent process. The outcome may vary from person to person depending on their innate abilities and circumstances.

However

, teaching them to do things right when they are

kids

is beneficial,

instead

of training at

younger

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age.

For example

, if they don't learn to do the home chores during

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, they end up

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opposing and showing disinterest in future, so it is critical to teach them good behaviour before turning

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. But, In order to achieve these desired results, most of the

parents

adopt

punishment

as the best

approach

, which brings additional stress to both parties.

For example

, in India,

parents

used to beat

kids

without proper explanation for even small mistakes

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and

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depression and suicidal attempts. So,

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punishment

is not an option to differentiate between good and bad. To solve

this

problem there are multiple options to uplift a child and that depends on the child-rearing and pedagogy methods but not on the degree of

punishment

.

Firstly

,

parents

have a better understanding of their offspring, and they are able to correctly estimate their mood, capabilities and psychology. By following the democratic

approach

of travelling closely with

kids

, explaining the importance and the expected outcome of each task by creating a friendly atmosphere will yield fruitful results.

Secondly

, school teachers take additional responsibility by providing moral support, explaining the cause and effect with proper examples by understanding their strengths, weaknesses and creating an uplift plan,

instead

of imposing strict rules. In conclusion, severe restrictions are not a suggestable choice, in

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this

process yield negative results. Prudent

parents

and teachers play a vital role in upbringing the child through a constructive feedback

approach