Nowadays many people choose to be slef-employed, rather than work for a company or organisation, Why might this be the case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent
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has been seen that many
people
are choosing to be self-employed rather than working for someone else.In
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reason
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behind why
people
are choosing to be self-employed and what can be the disadvantages of
this
. On the
one
hand,
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due to
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of competition organisations sometimes take up
the
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project
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with unrealistic
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.
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cause
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thier
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their
employee to
work
long hours to meet
this
deadline.
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cause
employees
to
work
for
long
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amount of time
due to
which there is no
work
-life balance for
such
employees
.
This
gradually increases and can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle increasing the stress among
such
people
. Many
people
feel pressured
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under their bosses simply because they think they could
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better job on their own.
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in competition inside the organisation ,itself many think that they are not getting the opportunity they deserve. A major factor contributing to
this
factor could be unequal pay among the organisation .New joiners
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a better pay scale
then
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the existing
employees
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a
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discomfort among the
employees
. The above mention reasons encourage them to get self-employed rather
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working for someone. Recently,
One
of my
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working as a CA for a big firm decided to start his own firm because he felt that we were not getting paid fair with the amount of
work
he was doing for the company he
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working for.
On the other hand
, starting your own venture is not
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as
one
might think. In the
intial
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years of ,business the income may not be stable. Expect from doing your
work
you may be to take care of the expenses that come along it
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example, rent , light and wifi bill etc. If
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doesn't
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goes
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according to your plan it might cause more and more issues. In conclusion, starting your own venture might
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good
due to
stressful
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work
environment it might not be as easy as
one
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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