Nowadays many people choose to be slef-employed, rather than work for a company or organisation, Why might this be the case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
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are choosing to be self-employed rather than working for someone else.In this
,essay we will discuss the major reason reason
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people
are choosing to be self-employed and what can be the disadvantages of this
. On the one
hand, Nowdays
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nowadays
due to
lot
of competition organisations sometimes take up Change the article
a lot
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projects
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This
cause
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causes
thier
employee to Correct your spelling
their
work
long hours to meet this
deadline. This
cause employees
to work
for long
amount of time Add an article
a long
due to
which there is no work
-life balance for such
employees
. This
gradually increases and can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle increasing the stress among such
people
. Many people
feel pressured working
under their bosses simply because they think they couldChange the verb form
to work
a
better job on their own. Add a missing verb
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in competition inside the organisation ,itself many think that they are not getting the opportunity they deserve. A major factor contributing to Correct your spelling
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this
factor could be unequal pay among the organisation .New joiners gets
a better pay scale Change the verb form
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. The above mention reasons encourage them to get self-employed ratherCorrect word choice
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of my friend
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as easy
one
might think. In the intial
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initial
work
you may be to take care of the expenses that come along it for
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, for
this
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the stressful
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite