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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand,Other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#university #education #job #hand #people #skills
Nowadays in
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contemporary society students aims to get a good
degree
 from a reputed university or college.Whereas, some
are tend
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 to
self working
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 criteria.Some people believe it is better to have a university
degree
 to get a job to make their life more secure.In my
opinion
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 I believe
that is
 true.
Firstly
, many think that it is
vitally
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 important cause to getting a proper territory education despite having
skills
.Indeed it will open paths for life long journey.
Moreover
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 they will
able
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 to find a
six digit
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 salary as well.
Also
 when it comes to reputation having a good standard
proffesion
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profession
 in a reputed field adapt you to society as a very well educated man.The competition to get
in to
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 demanded form of occupation have been really popular right now.So students ought to have their performances at its’ peak.
Secondly
 and more importantly gaining experience and increasing
skills
 aid you with making a good business or
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.It will
also
 help you to emerge
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as a successful entrepreneur.Nowadays wealthiest civilians are always known to be business people.Whether you have got lack of qualifications,
however
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 you have absolutely
intergrated
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integrated
 society as a business icon.
Finally
 in my opinion,whether being in a high school or needing
an
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experience and soft
skills
 make you eligible for what you choose.For
an
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example
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 if you will
defenetely
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definitely
 be needing a
degree
 or a diploma. By the way of conclusion,getting a good job requires a relevant background.According to each job
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perspective
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prospective
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 there are specific needs that
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the candidate
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candidate
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 should bear.Whether it is
a
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 equivalent
degree
 or a skill.People should make sure that they attain
necessary
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skills
 to be
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a success
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success
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successful
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  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
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