some people say that teaching adults is more fruitful than teaching kids in that it helps with your personal growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use personal experience and references to strengthen your arguments.

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thing that I found is that
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of the most proven differences between adult and young learner
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is “
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management”.
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kid’s
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seem to be more fun and kinesthetic, in adult
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you are not supposed to spend a considerable amount of time
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explaining
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the classroom rules.
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you have more time to teach and assign interesting tasks.
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might help you not to get work burn-out which is a great concern for many of us since after a while we might lose our interest in teaching.
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to having more time to design various classroom activities which can help you to improve your creativity tremendously. As an example, I started my teaching career with a
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full of 18 students. They were boys
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aged around 6-10 and as I entered the
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late because of the car accident that I had that day, they were shouting and jumping in the
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. I introduced myself but the
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was too noisy and scorching since it was
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a small
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without any fans or air conditioners
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the middle of July. I got panicked as I couldn’t manage the
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but I started to play games with them and ask them to draw their favourite toy. The
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its self was
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a disaster, students didn’t have any motivation to continue the
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so that I was too stressed. I was prepared for the
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, I didn’t consider
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management as
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of my anticipation problems. To be honest, after years of teaching,
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I am dealing with
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problem in my
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.
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, when you are teaching adults, you get to know people from different professions, industries, and educational backgrounds in comparison to kids who have a limited range of experiences. As
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consequence of it, you can have a variety of topics to discuss in the
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. In these sorts of
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you have to surf the internet and as you would check different websites and watch plenty of videos on YouTube. your world knowledge would be expanded so is your General English.
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, I remember I was working on a project about the smart watering system with Raspberry-pi. Meanwhile,
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of my students proposed an idea about considering the cold weather as
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of the anticipated problems. I wasn’t aware of it before and as he mentioned it, I realized my system would be ruined in the
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couple of weeks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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