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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the learning process from kinder to the highest degrees studies, are depending on
computers
. Computer operation is a piece of basic knowledge
that is
 an essential thing to know by children since they were primary.
On the contrary
, due to dependency, there are several risks they will feel for the long term of operating
computers
.
Such
 as myopia for a long
time
 and migraine while seeing the screen too long. I strongly agree with
computers
 being introduced to kids as shortly as their go-to school.
However
, teachers and parents had to limit their screen
time
 to avoid risks. Several injuries could happen by seeing into the
computers
 for a long
time
.
Computers
 screens have radiation that makes our eyes exhausted. And it proved where numerous kids have already got myopia since kindergarten. Consequentlyscreen
time
 should be controlled either by parents or teachers, From various points of view, computer skills are highly demanding in any job's requirement. Since technology is massively developing and easily accessible, Students could gather all the knowledge and information in only one device. So
computers
 as a medium have to be introduced in the classrooms earlier. A computer is the best device to use in the modern era, could help teacher-guided students gain more information faster and conveniently. Whereas, there are some negative impacts due to reliance on
this
 device. So, children had to utilize
computers
 for educational purposes and get a parental supervisor to reduce any harmful side effects.
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