Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is a community that would say learning the

science

of

food

and knowing how to prepare it is important. Somehow, some people argue with that statement and agree to fill up the student schedules with main

subjects

. It is quite important for

children

to study what they will eat to achieve healthy habits earlier, but

food

science

also

can be taught by their

parents

outside the schools. In my point of view, learning the

science

of fo It will be a

disaod

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discard

discord

disco

will be a relaxation time after learned boring materials and will

gained

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their mood to face the

next

subjects

. By teaching the students how important

healthy

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diet

sooner

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is sooner

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.

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is.

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Children

will easily

adapted

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with

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to

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clean

food

and

less

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are less

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likely to eat junk

food

because of knowing how bad it is.

In addition

, obesity happened to someone do not know what is happening in their body and will be a bad decision if it

stay

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on

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in

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it

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shape.

Also

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obesity

cause

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causes

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a lot

organ

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of organ

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disease that could be

a complications

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complications

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someday

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some day

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. So it will be a good idea for

children

to

educated

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since they were young.

On the other hand

, some people think schools are a place for just learning important

subjects

. If

children

only learned important

subjects

, they will get bored easily and will not enjoy the others

subjects

. Like mathematics, most

of

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children

's will say they hate

that

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subjects

,

unfortunately

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if they just learned something boring and

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a math class after it. It will be a disaster for them. And not all of the

parents

really know how to teach

children

the

science

of

food

and how to prepare it well in their home. The result is

children

is not recommended to take just only important

subjects

.

science

of

food

and the way prepare it is being on the must teach wishlist by some

parents

in schools.

Otherwise

, teaching just only

important

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an important

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subject to

children

still

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in demand by some

parents

. Being healthy since younger is

a good knowledge

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good knowledge

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, while

let

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the kids learn crucial subject will overheat their brain and make them not in the mood.

For instance

,

food

science

is really critical nowadays since junk

food

are

easily

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to

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access

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by kids. So they will prefer craving some green and fibrous

food

instead

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fatty and savoury meal. To prevent any kinds of

food

that cause disease.