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With the fast pace of modern life, more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#pace #life #people #food #meals
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our
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today’s hectic world everything has changed into being mechanical and super-fast, there is an influx in
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a number
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 of
people
 who replace fast
food
to
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 their so-called
health
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food
.
Although
 eating fast
food
 can cause some
health
 problems in my opinion having fast
food
 in rush times could be
quick
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 and
also
 cheap choice.
From
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one
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 hand, eating fast
food
 to a large extent can harm
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the humans
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humans
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 body and orgasms as it usually contains
high
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 amount of preservatives and additives.
That is
 because
company’s
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the company’s
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 holder aim is to process
this
food
 for
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the consumer
a consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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 with less price with the aim of
grab
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 the
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customer
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costumer
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customer
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 attention.
Meanwhile
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 normal
people
 neglect the importance of their
health
 and scarify their
health
 to the affordable price of fast
food
 containing oil in excess and
other detrimental additive
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another detrimental additive
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.
However
, irrespective of all, is not a prime disadvantage nowadays there is
a
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high control over
procedure
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the procedure
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 of fast foods and processed foods and they are made under the most hygienic conditions.
From
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 the other hand, the lifestyles have been
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 widely, since
people
 have to spend long hours outside at work or hustling around they often face
shortage
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 of time.
Accordingly
, they cannot spend long hours
cook
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 their desirable and
so called
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so-called
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 healthy meals at home as it is
time consuming
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time-consuming
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. Irrespective of
health
 problems that can cause
they
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them
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forget
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 about traditional
food
.
Furthermore
, for
many
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 fast
food
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foods
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 has low cost and there is
now
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no
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other
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another
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 alternative for
many
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any
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group
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groups
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 of
people
 in society.
This
 could be a high advantage for many that really can’t afford
high
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the high
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 cost of living and without
it
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,it
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 many would suffer from starvation. In general, having fast
food
 as a main meal all the
times
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time
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 for
individual
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individuals
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 wouldn’t benefit us,
although
,
fast
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the fast
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food
 industry has developed and is often controlled by safety organizations.
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