The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps demonstrate a small town
centre
named Islip, in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the plan is to expand and modernize the Linking Words
centre
to allow for more stores and a greater focus on new Use synonyms
housings
, Fix the agreement mistake
housing
in addition
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new
establishment will be added with extra space for activities.
Currently, Islip town Correct article usage
a new
centre
consists of only a main road which is running east to west, Use synonyms
park
, Correct article usage
a park
school
, housing and a row of shops Correct article usage
a school
that is
along the countryside. Linking Words
According to
Linking Words
proposal
, only the school and the park will maintain their original position Add an article
the proposal
although
the size of the Linking Words
later
will be reduced.
The most significant development will be the extension of new facilities Correct your spelling
latter
Linking Words
for
instance, Add the comma(s)
,for
car
park, shopping Correct article usage
a car
centre
, bus station, pedestrians and new Use synonyms
housings
. Fix the agreement mistake
housing
However
, there will be no more countryside as Linking Words
plan
show the correction of roads into Correct article usage
the plan
dual
carriageway. Add an article
a dual
Thus
the main road will be no more in use by the reason of the conversion to pedestrians only.Linking Words
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