The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps demonstrate a small town
centre
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named Islip, in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the plan is to expand and modernize the
centre
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to allow for more stores and a greater focus on new
housings
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housing
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,
in addition
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new
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a new
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establishment will be added with extra space for activities. Currently, Islip town
centre
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consists of only a main road which is running east to west,
park
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a park
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,
school
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a school
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, housing and a row of shops
that is
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along the countryside.
According to
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proposal
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the proposal
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, only the school and the park will maintain their original position
although
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the size of the
later
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latter
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will be reduced. The most significant development will be the extension of new facilities
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for
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,for
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instance,
car
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a car
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park, shopping
centre
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, bus station, pedestrians and new
housings
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housing
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.
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, there will be no more countryside as
plan
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the plan
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show the correction of roads into
dual
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a dual
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carriageway.
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the main road will be no more in use by the reason of the conversion to pedestrians only.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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