Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear
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Barrett, With reference to your advertisement published in the weekend newspaper, I would like to help you in a few hours at your home
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summer. As you mentioned in the advertisement , I can care for you when your permanent take carer in leave. While staying with you I will assist to continue your exercises doing in
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basis. At ,present I am a student of Nursing Care Collage and need to cover practical sessions to complete the
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I will be able to come to your place
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I will be benefited to practise the English Language with you as I am not a native English speaker. According to the semester plan only three days per week from Monday to Wednesday I will be available and the time is 1.00 pm to 6 pm. Please feel free to contact me
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for a positive response. Yours Faithfully, xxxxxx
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
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  • Prior commitments
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