While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Human resource is one of the most important and influencing
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for a company. Job seekers are usually asked to present their job
qualification
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qualifications
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and knowledge while they are having
interview
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interviews
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and employers will identify the right people with the right position in
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of their profiles and personal qualities. In my view, qualifications and
experience
should be
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the
first
priority while selecting the appropriate person. While
recuriting
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recruiting
, it is actually hard to see through a person within a short interview. One personality can be complicated as well as pretended to be,
therefore
, as an interviewer, it is nearly impossible to understand a person for just 15 minutes. The most obvious and simple way to
distingish
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distinguish
among various is to screen through their past and
experience
from their resume. It does not mean that employers should only pay attention to the written but
that is
a more
dircet
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direct
way to know a stranger in a limited time. Some jobs' nature required
a specific knowledge
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and
experience
as it allows no mistake as it
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related to human lives. In
such
jobs, a certain
skills
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set, education level and physical condition must be achieved as the job duties are complex.
For example
, being a doctor has to complete years of studies, placements and
interships
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internships
to gain
pratical
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practical
experience
. It is undoubtedly that being a doctor should
also
be
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a willingness
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willingness
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to help people but
a
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kind heart
it
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is never good enough to perform
a
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surgery and to save lives. To conclude, I believe personal qualities have the same weight
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qualification and
experience
.
However
, due to the limitation of interview time and the importance of skills required in some jobs, I suggest the employers should pay more attention
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the latter than the former.
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