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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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is
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 the temperatures and daylight
hours
 in two metropolises,
London
 and
Sydney
, on the
last
 weekend of
December
in
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apply
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2018. In general, Londoners were having
a
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apply
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winter weather at that time whilst it was summer in
Sydney
 with remarkable disparities in terms of temperatures and
hours
 of sunlight. Specifically, during that weekend, the weather was relatively cold in
London
 with the degrees ranging from 3 to
13 degree
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13-degree
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celcius
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celsius
, in stark contrast,
Sydney
 citizens enjoyed a much warmer one with the highest temperature of
31 degree
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celcius
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celsius
 and the lowest of 17
celcius
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celsius
 degrees.
Besides
, a significantly wider temperature gap was witnessed in
Sydney
 as compared to
London
 during a day
while
 there were minor changes in the weather of each city from
December
 28th 2018 to
December
 30th 2018
Furthermore
,
Sydney
 enjoyed longer sunlight
hours
 than
London
, when the sun went up three
hours
 earlier and dropped approximately four
hours
 later. A common feature between the two cities was that the sunrise and sunset times remained fairly constant over
this
last
December
 weekend of 2018.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, london, sydney, december with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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