The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the temperatures and daylight

hours

in two metropolises,

London

and

Sydney

, on the

last

weekend of

December

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2018. In general, Londoners were having

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winter weather at that time whilst it was summer in

Sydney

with remarkable disparities in terms of temperatures and

hours

of sunlight. Specifically, during that weekend, the weather was relatively cold in

London

with the degrees ranging from 3 to

13 degree

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celcius

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celsius

, in stark contrast,

Sydney

citizens enjoyed a much warmer one with the highest temperature of

31 degree

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celcius

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celsius

and the lowest of 17

celcius

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celsius

degrees.

Besides

, a significantly wider temperature gap was witnessed in

Sydney

as compared to

London

during a day

while

there were minor changes in the weather of each city from

December

28th 2018 to

December

30th 2018

Furthermore

Sydney

enjoyed longer sunlight

hours

than

London

, when the sun went up three

hours

earlier and dropped approximately four

hours

later. A common feature between the two cities was that the sunrise and sunset times remained fairly constant over

this

last

December

weekend of 2018.

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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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