Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

In

contemporary

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era, governments around the world play a vital role in

a

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development of human societies. They can choose to invest

public

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in public

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finance in building either public

infrastructure

or

entertainment

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the entertainment

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industry. I believe that government must allocate

money

to construct

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public services rather than expending

money

to promote art and music. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the primary duty of government and the significance of investing public

money

to prepare public overheads.

First

, the primary role of authorities

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improve the

welfare

of

people

.

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, a study found that the countries which allocate

money

to increase

welfare

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the welfare

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of

people

can achieve the goals of access to health services, education, and security for everyone. Ensuring individuals’ reach to these basic services strengthen

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, economic, and political bases of societies. Building these foundations strong will guarantee the greater and better

welfare

of several generations to come. Another responsibility of ruling agencies is to build overheads like roads, bridges, railways, and cities. Researchers have highlighted that

expending

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money

in

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on

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such

infrastructure

encourages trade and development of private sectors across

nation

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the nation

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.

Furthermore

, the easy access to roads and railways reduces the cost of travel and transaction which provide

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for

people

to expand their businesses to

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places far away from their home.

Furthermore

, the expense

on

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of

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public

infrastructure

brings numerous benefits to both

people

and government. To conclude, governments that build their public

infrastructure

and strong public

welfare

system prepare the

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of prosperous societies.

Therefore

, I strongly recommend governments to allocate

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for public development rather than for the enrichment of arts and amusement.