A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this job Tell them when you are free to attend an interview

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you that, yesterday I noticed an advertisement in the Hindu Newspaper regarding manager post in your eating place. I am much fascinated about applying for the

job

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at your restaurant. I am Anu, post-graduation in

hotel

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management. I possess six years of experience in eating places in the category of assistant manager at

hotel

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Taj. Now, presently doing a

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at Crowne plaza in India in the manager category.

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, I can help with the people who have worked in the kitchen, communicate with the event management team, coordinate with our immense guests.

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, it would be helpful to do a

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at your prestigious

hotel

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, I can quickly stick with the people who

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working

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, it would create a smooth functioning of the

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, and

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it has to provide customer satisfaction for the restaurant.

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,it assists in dealing with a huge customer

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, makes a good profit for your restaurant, and

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those skills improve my

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level of carrier development. If you are interested in my profile. I would like to attend the interview at any time between 10 am to 12 pm. so that it won’t make any distraction from my current

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. I am looking forward to your kind response. Yours faithfully, Anu

Submitted by Bhavani Viswanathan on Wed Dec 29 2021

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this job Tell them when you are free to attend an interview

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to show imported foreign film and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people think that robots are important for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.