Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With climate change getting worse in human’s life, environmental issues seem to be more significant for us. Some
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essential work to solve for each person, while
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people
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people
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to cope with it. From my perspective, both views
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their own reasons.
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the
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that it is necessary that individuals should take measures to tackle part of environmental problems in daily life, which means
people
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to do all they can do protecting surroundings. Sorting rubbish, reducing the use of plastic bags, and saving water as well as electricity,
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around us like these are worth being noticed.
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, low-carbon travelling, like walk, bicycle, or bus,
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car, it would be efficient to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide.
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mentioned above might be easy for us to change.
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individual person can do is limited, and it would be more useful if they combine with the government. One of the advantages with regard to
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the public, they have an effect on not only declaring a certain policy but
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guiding a correct direction to residents.
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will be of more ease and
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. Overall, it seems to me that as long as individuals spare no efforts to protect the environment around them, communities try their best to guide as well as supervise citizens’
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, governments do their utmost to improve environmental policies, it could be the most effective solution to solve environmental problems.
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  • environmental issues
  • sustainable habits
  • systemic industrial emissions
  • deforestation
  • sustainable operations
  • eco-friendly products
  • consumer demand
  • public advocacy
  • grassroots movements
  • legislative changes
  • conserve energy
  • reduce waste
  • recycling
  • supply chains
  • international cooperation
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