Task 2: Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As providing equality to both

females

and males in every field has been the main issue in modern society,

women

's

role

in a country's

police

or military

force

has been in the spotlight.

While

some people argue that

women

should be equally given a chance to serve as

police

or

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soldier

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, others believe that they are not cut out for these jobs. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and argue why

females

ought to have an equal opportunity to work in the national

police

or military

force

.

To begin

with, some think

women

should play an equal

role

as

men

in a nation's

police

or military service.

Firstly

, both

females

and males have to be treated equally before the law. Regardless of a candidate's abilities and capabilities, they have to be provided with equal chances to work as a

police

or a militant.

Secondly

,

women

sometimes perform better than their

men's

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counterparts.

For instance

, when there is a meltdown by a protester, lady

police

can superbly quell the situation with

rhetorics

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and

persuasions

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persuasion

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.

This

is why some reiterate that

women

should play an equal

role

as

men

in the

police

and military

force

.

On the other hand

, others say that

females

are not suitable for these kinds of careers. First of all, working as a

police

or a militant requires a myriad of strengths and violence.

For instance

, when they are called

for arresting

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a violent offender who refuses to go with the

police

, policewomen can be out-beaten by the offender in terms of strength, which means arresting him/her will be very difficult.

In addition

,

women

are more emotional than

men

.

In other words

, they empathise with criminals or enemies.

This

emotional characteristic can

make

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a negative impact on their performance. These are the reasons why some argue that

women

should be excluded from these careers.

To sum up

, some argue that

women

need to play an equal

role

as

men

in the

police

or military

force

because equal opportunities should be given regardless of gender and some policewomen are better than policemen.

On the contrary

, others think

women

should not be employed as

police

or

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militant as they are weaker and more emotional than

men

.

However

, I think

women

should be able to serve in

police

or military services as

women

can play a significant

role

in the fields.