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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

#unemployment #challenge #school-leavers #countries #challenges #face #people
Education plays
crucial
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 role in every
field
 while unemployment has
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very
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 common obstacle for youngsters in manifold countries who
are dropped
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 their schooling for some
reasons
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. I completely agree with the above statement and
reasons
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 will be explained below along with some major problems which youth is facing at
this
 time. To commence with, the most conspicuous reason is knowledge and education. Every
field
require
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 quality of knowledge to compete in
this
 fast pace world as well as to get superior productivity from employees. Any
company
 does not even hire uneducated
people
 because they do not have done
study
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in
particular
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a particular
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field
. To
examplify
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 it, as there are machines in
company
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the company
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 to do work more efficiently while if
worker
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the worker
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 does not know how to operate and work with machinery
then
 how
company
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 will cooperate with those workers. Moving
further
 to the main obstacles of today's youngsters, nepotism and
cooruption
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corruption
 both are mostly
consider
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 during
selection
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 of
worker
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workers
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 at every workplace. Meanwhile deserving young
people
 who have good skills and
ability
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 to earn good money can not get jobs. They do not have connections or money to pay for getting work. Mostly rich
people
 are hired in
reputative
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reputation
 companies.
For instance
, some
people
 have
relative
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 in
company
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the company
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 who give their
reference
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 to
company
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the company
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 for new hiring.
Thus
, managers
cosider
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consider
this
. To conclude
it
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, nobody
give
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 chance to those who
is
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 not well qualified. I certainly think so because education is very necessary.
Althought
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Although
 young society is good in
educational
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the educational
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field
 but still frustrated due to unemployment.
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