You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus. I live in Khilgaon. I am a full-time employee in a bank. Today, I am writing

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letter to inform you that, I will be unable to do the computer course ahead Because it creates a lot of problems for me. To embark with, right now I am working in a private bank called (Brac bank) which is located in Gulshan. My job starts at 10:00 a.m. and finished at 6 p.m,

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, I become very tired

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I am working as an accountant.

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month, I got a promotion and now I have to do more hard work for my better performance.

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, I face many problems with

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course. After getting progress I have to spend more time in my office.

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, I cannot tell you the exact time when I will be attending the class.

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, after office hours my mind does not support me to do anything else and it makes me bored. Though

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computer course is

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important for me yet I cannot continue it.

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, If you tell me

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you taking classes at the weekend,

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I will change my place for the class, and please let me know the timetable. Over and above, if you do not take classes at the weekend, I will join the class three or four months later when I will organise my work well. I hope that you will understand my situation and tell me when I can be able to join. if you need

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information please let me know. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus

Zannatul Irin Sun Jan 02 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

268 words

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