You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear sir, My name is Zannatul Firdaus. I live in Khilgaon. I am a full-time employee in a bank. Today, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, I will be unable to do the computer course ahead Because it creates a lot of problems for me. To embark with, right now I am working in a private bank called (Brac bank) which is located in Gulshan. My job starts at 10:00 a.m. and finished at 6 p.m,
therefore
, I become very tired
in addition
I am working as an accountant.
Last
month, I got a promotion and now I have to do more hard work for my better performance.
Moreover
, I face many problems with
this
course. After getting progress I have to spend more time in my office.
Thus
, I cannot tell you the exact time when I will be attending the class.
Furthermore
, after office hours my mind does not support me to do anything else and it makes me bored. Though
this
computer course is
also
important for me yet I cannot continue it.
However
, If you tell me
that is
you taking classes at the weekend,
then
I will change my place for the class, and please let me know the timetable. Over and above, if you do not take classes at the weekend, I will join the class three or four months later when I will organise my work well. I hope that you will understand my situation and tell me when I can be able to join. if you need
further
information please let me know. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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