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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colours influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Most of us are aware of
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 matching design
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in
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 everywhere. Shops, restaurants, hospitals,
workspace
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 with their respective
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 according to the research.
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people
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 could not aware that
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color
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 affects their reactions, how they feel and how they are attracted
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. In
this
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 are important for our daily lives and our productivity.
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 of all, decorating with suitable
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color
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crucial
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 part in day to day
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, especially it is important
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 kinds of places like offices and hospitals. Mostly white
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color
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 decoration can be seen in hospital. Research
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 shown that white
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color
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 calm our mind and seeing white
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color
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 makes
people
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 feel relaxed.
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, some areas
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colored
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 with
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 theme in
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hospital
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 like children
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 areas to make them happy. In some of the offices are decorated with blue
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color
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 normally. Sometimes it is mixed with white and blue
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color
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.
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 plays
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in
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 important part in order to come up with good ideas. We can see that meeting rooms
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 with white and blue mixed
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color
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 not to get dull but to be active and to produce nice ideas.
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 of all, choosing the suitable
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color
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important
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 role to improve health and ability to work in
office
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the office
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.
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,
people
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 simply get calm if the places
are design
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color
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. They feel relaxed and more energetic.
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, studying in
library
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 is more productive than studying in
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 dark and very dully room. It shows that the lighting and
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color
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 affect
people
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emotion
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emotions
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. The
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color
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 schemes
also
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 influence the ability to someone work as I mentioned before. To sum up,
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color
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affect
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 not only our emotions but
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 our
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. Designing with suitable
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color
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 is
major
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 role especially in offices and hospitals.
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