many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

People nowadays tend to eat original things. They consider that without any additional manufacturing is better than

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, others think that the taste of manufactured

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that these artificial foods may lead

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physical issues.

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essay is going to discuss the reasons why they choose and whether

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can be attained. When we go to

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, we have various

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of products. We can choose packed original foods or manufactured cans. A load of the poor may take the later

one

and there are several reasons caused

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.

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, since they are poor, they obviously pick the cheapest

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. The price

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them to do

this

.

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, even if they have more money, they may not buy healthier nourishment

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or original sustainment. They still consider the unhealthy

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.

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can attribute to

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of

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. Since they do not know the bright sides of nature food, they would not think that eating healthier is more important.

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, some people say that artificial prices should be higher than

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nourishment. But

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cannot

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. The meaning of those food

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is earning more money. Since sugar and other

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unhealthy

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unhealth

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additional things

such

as fat are still inexpensive. They definitely exercise those things to produce more products.

As a result

, they can sell sustainment with a lot of money. To conclude, I consider that higher the price is useless to make people avoid buying products with lots of sugar. Those big

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will prevent

this

happen.

Also

, lack of nourishment background is another reason that cannot boost them to buy healthier foods.