You and your friend arranged a program at a restaurant and all of you went there to have a meal. You were satisfied with the food and service of the restaurant Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In you letter *Mention what kind of program it was. *Describe the environment of the restaurant. *Describe what you like about the food and the service.

Dear manager, My name is Zannatul Firdaus. I live in khilgaon. Today I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, I and my friends had a meal at your
restaurant
and we all are very happy with the
food
and service. to embark with,
last
week, it was my best friend's birthday.
Thus
, and some of my friends decided to arrange a surprise birthday party.
In addition
, we have chosen your
restaurant
called, the dining lounge.
Moreover
, we searched online about the
food
and services and we found it very worthy.
Furthermore
, I would like to talk about the environment of the
restaurant
, it is very clean, and well organised. I
also
like the decorations, and the
restaurant
is very big, beautiful and quiet. We took many photos on that day, all the photos were captured very nice.
However
, I love the
food
very much, it was very tasty and the
food
was perfect in the quantity. Over and above, the service is
also
very good. waiters served us
food
very quickly. When my friend arrived they play the birthday song and they
also
helped us to decorate our background. They are very cooperative. I hope you will carry on these services. We like almost everything about your restaurants. We will definitely eat at your
restaurant
again. Thank you so much. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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