You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing

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letter with the connection of that ordered

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was missing when I opened the envelope at today morning. My existing

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was damaged by me that’s why I ordered it through the online service of your bank and received the notification e-mail regarding sending it by courier service. I am worried about the misuse of

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cards by some strangers. As nowadays incidents like

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are not uncommon. Regarding registering the complaint of that, in the morning I called on bank helpline number but I did not get the answer from required section which supposed to do. In ,addition it takes too much time. In

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scenario, I would like to inform you that please carry out a proper investigation related to

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incident

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mistake does not happen again.

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, please block that lost

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in order to avoid the misuse of that. I request you that please send me a new

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without any mistake

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time. So I am able to do my scheduled transactions. Thanks in advance and I look forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely, Akshay Thakare

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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
confidential

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