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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing
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 letter with the connection of that ordered
credit
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card
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 was missing when I opened the envelope at today morning. My existing
credit
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card
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 was damaged by me that’s why I ordered it through the online service of your bank and received the notification e-mail regarding sending it by courier service. I am worried about the misuse of
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 cards by some strangers. As nowadays incidents like
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 are not uncommon. Regarding registering the complaint of that, in the morning I called on bank helpline number but I did not get the answer from required section which supposed to do. In ,addition it takes too much time. In
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 scenario, I would like to inform you that please carry out a proper investigation related to
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 incident
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 mistake does not happen again.
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, please block that lost
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card
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 in order to avoid the misuse of that. I request you that please send me a new
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 without any mistake
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 time. So I am able to do my scheduled transactions. Thanks in advance and I look forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely, Akshay Thakare
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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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