You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

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Dear sir or mam, My name is Ms X and I am currently working as the managing director at a prestigious company in Dhaka, Bangladesh named 'Royal Dynasty'. I am planning to visit your city to attend a pre-scheduled 2-day work training amidst which I would like to reside in your respected hotel. I wish to book a room for two nights at the hotel for the

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Saturday and Sunday of the upcoming month and I prefer to stay in one of the suits if available on the previously mentioned days. I must inform you that I will be in need of a conference room to hold a meeting consisting of 15 people from 9am to 12 pm in those 2days. The hall must be well equipped with a projector and a whiteboard to write on. A full-time driver with a car for four is

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requirement that can be used during any crisis situation. I will be expecting a booking confirmation letter with a mention of the availability of the requested arrangements. Kind regards, Ms X

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for and the solutions to this situation?

Some people say that parent should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own discuss both opinions and give your opinion ?

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There is an idea, according to which that with more and more people using the internet and messaging, the communication in the real world will cease to exist.

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