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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

#group #tour #guide #travel
There is no doubt that these days many people are
traveling
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 in groups with a tour
guide
. The question is, is it better to
travel
 with
professional
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a professional
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tourist
guide
 in
the
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groups or as
individual
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an individual
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. In
this
essay
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 I am going to discuss both the views and drow my own opinion. In terms of
positive
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the positive
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 side,
travel
 with the
tourist
guide
 could be better for tourism. The main reason given to support
this
 claim is that the
travel
guide
 has the knowledge about the country and the places. To illustrate, he knows places tourism doesn’t know
such
 as small towns or caves.
Moreover
 know the dangerous side of the country, so tourists will not be getting in trouble with him.
For example
,
guide
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the guide
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 will avoid poor area’s that have
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larger
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lager
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larger
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 number of crimes and stilling.
In
addition
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 the tour
guide
 well saved your time and organizes the trip, so they will visit all the places.
However
, tour trips have
negative
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a negative
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 side.
Firstly
, it is extremely expensive for most
of
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the
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people.
In other
words
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 it is cost a lot of
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money
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moneys
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money
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.
Secondly
, if the
travel
guide
 wasn’t professional it we’ll be not worth the money that you paid.
This
because
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 the trip could be boring so it will
ruining
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 your holiday.
Also
,
travel
 with a group might be less uncomfortable for the
un social
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 people, so they will not enjoy their
travel
. In conclusion,
although
 it said
traveling
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 in a group with
tourist
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a tourist
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guide
 is might be the better way to
travel
, it
also
 could be the worst.
Therefore
, I believe that
travel
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 with
tourist
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a tourist
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guide
 is the most significant experience
of
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traveling
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travelling
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.
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  • logistics
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  • exclusive experiences
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