Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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There is no doubt that these days many people are
traveling
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in groups with a tour
guide
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. The question is, is it better to
travel
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with
professional
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a professional
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tourist
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guide
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in
the
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groups or as
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an individual
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. In
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I am going to discuss both the views and drow my own opinion. In terms of
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the positive
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side,
travel
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with the
tourist
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guide
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could be better for tourism. The main reason given to support
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claim is that the
travel
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guide
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has the knowledge about the country and the places. To illustrate, he knows places tourism doesn’t know
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as small towns or caves.
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know the dangerous side of the country, so tourists will not be getting in trouble with him.
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,
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guide
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the guide
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will avoid poor area’s that have
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larger
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lager
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number of crimes and stilling.
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addition
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the tour
guide
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well saved your time and organizes the trip, so they will visit all the places.
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, tour trips have
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a negative
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side.
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, it is extremely expensive for most
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the
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people.
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words
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it is cost a lot of
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money
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moneys
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.
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, if the
travel
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guide
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wasn’t professional it we’ll be not worth the money that you paid.
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because
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the trip could be boring so it will
ruining
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your holiday.
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,
travel
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with a group might be less uncomfortable for the
un social
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people, so they will not enjoy their
travel
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. In conclusion,
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it said
traveling
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travelling
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in a group with
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tourist
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a tourist
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guide
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is might be the better way to
travel
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, it
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could be the worst.
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, I believe that
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travel
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with
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tourist
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a tourist
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guide
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is the most significant experience
of
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apply
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traveling
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travelling
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational
  • logistics
  • convenience
  • exclusive experiences
  • safety and security
  • spontaneous adventures
  • historical sites
  • cultural practices
  • landmarks
  • insights
  • socialization
  • lifelong friendships
  • restrictive
  • authentic experiences
  • skip-the-line
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