Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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should allocate funds for entertainment rather than spending on public transports . I partially agree with the above statement

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will hereby explain my point of view On the one hand , arts like music and cinemas are important to overcome the day to day stress. Most of all the entertainments are based on

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, it will directly affect the future of the people who work if it’s not recognised by

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responsibilities , listening

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and cinemas are the only escapism for

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short period of time.

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if the

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is not supporting the art financially it will lead most of the

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, Governments should improve

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public transports as it should be easily available for all the

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. For example in India public transports like train , bus and even roads are not friendly for handicaps, they pay tax but they don’t get there minimal consideration

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should spend money in both the field and they should allocate them

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