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Nowadays people tend to change a few careers during life. What are the reasons for this, in your opinion? Do you think it is good for the society as a whole?

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In the present day, It has been difficult to find
job
 opportunities due to the pandemic.
However
, the majority of people manage to get a different
occupation
. In
this
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 I discuss the possible reasons behind
this
 and state my opinion whether it is beneficial for society or not.
To begin
 with, Most of the employees tend to change their career path, due to they did not satisfied with the current wedges that they get paid and to gain more skills for their profession.
For instance
, I was working as a civil engineer for about three years in the same company, but they did not give any increment even I work efficiently for the Company. So that, I had to change the co-operation ,in order to increase my salary.
Although
 it was more beneficial to me to get experience.
Thus
, It is good to have various
job
 opportunities to improve a person's self-satisfaction and prove their worth in a particular
occupation
.
Secondly
, the Majority of the people can't survive with current expenses even they have a professional
occupation
. So they tend to learn new skills related to their
job
.
As a result
, those professionals can apply for
job
 opportunities and give
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 reputed authorities. So that, those professional can able to get high salary and have more possibilities to get a
job
 as soon as possible.
Therefore
,
this
 would be a
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 impact
to
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the
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society. In conclusion,most of the humankind change their
occupation
 due to salary, personal satisfaction and skills that they need to achieve.So I think that it would be
possitive
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positive
 impact to the society to
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 from each
occupation
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • career mobility
  • lifelong learning
  • job satisfaction
  • economic factors
  • market dynamics
  • redundancy
  • work-life balance
  • skill set
  • adaptation
  • innovation
  • personal growth
  • vocational evolution
  • technological advancements
  • workforce diversification
  • expertise development
  • professional transition
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