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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements

#internet #matter #hand #people #socialise #statements
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It is a fact that
internet
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technology
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 has helped
people
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 in connecting with their relatives and friends without the boundaries of distance and cost, but many
people
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 think that
technology
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 has made
people
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 become less socialized and more individualistic. To a certain extent, I would agree that the
internet
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 has negatively affected
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the
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people
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's social
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, but if we
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technology
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 in a wise and appropriate manner, it has a lot of positive functions.

On the one hand, it is true that many
people
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 are having social
life
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 problems these days, due to the existence of
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internet
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 and information
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. Almost everybody
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 their own mobile phone nowadays, and they can
use
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 it for browsing, chatting and online gaming.  With all the attractive and entertaining applications, many
people
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 like to play around with their
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 for hours and abandon their social
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.
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, it has been reported that many families are having communication problems these days due to they have less time for an eye to eye contact with other family members.
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, it can be clearly seen that the problem has
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 due to the improper and indiscipline act of users themselves. If the
internet
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 is used
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 the right purpose and
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 the appropriate portion, it would bring many benefits for mankind.
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,
internet
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technology
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 has truly changed the way individuals and corporations interact and correspond. With electronic email and chatting facilities
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 as yahoo or google,
people
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 could communicate and
connected
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 with other
people
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 in a more efficient and effective way.
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, the
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 could
also
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 be used to expand
people
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's networking. Social media sites
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 as Facebook or
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 could be used to connect
people
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 from different areas, maintain friendships and even it could be used for online businesses as well. 
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, it depends on
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the users themselves on how wise they
use
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 it. In conclusion,
although
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 online
technology
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 has become a problem for some
people
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's social
life
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, others disagree about it. To a certain point, I do believe that the
internet
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 could be a threat to our social
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, but if
people
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use
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 it wisely and appropriately
then
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 I do believe that it has a lot of benefits for individuals and societies.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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