In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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of new technology in
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will discuss both in succeeding paragraphs. To commence with the cardinal
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interact as a human being.
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age are into technology in teaching.Using gadgets as part of
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could attract them
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be encountered using
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grammar using an application on
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certain gadgets . To conclude using
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using technology have disadvantages
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