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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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 of new technology in
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 will discuss both in succeeding paragraphs. To commence with the cardinal
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benefits
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 it shows that individuals could interact,show's emotion
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 the passion of teachers and
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 a teacher can commend a
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Therefore
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 visible. In
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young
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the young
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method
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 could attract them
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 there are
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consequences
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grammar using an application on
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certain gadgets . To conclude using
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the traditional
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 of teaching has a positive trend overall and has advantages.
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 using technology have disadvantages
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