Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

Dear Sir, Writing

this

epistle to report an issue that I am currently encountering while sharing a hostel

room

with one of my seniors. My name is John,

First

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your student in Computer Science department and I am sharing

room

no 201 in hostel no 3 with a final year student of

same

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stream whose name is Allen. He is creating

a lots

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of disturbance to me due to which I find it very hard to stay with him.

Initially

, I thought

this

problem could be mitigated on my own,

however

, now I believe I entail your assistance as now the situation is out of my control and I am feeling

bit

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uncomfortable

to stay

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with him anymore. Every now and

then

, he conducts

party

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in the

room

itself and invites his multiple friends. Not only party but he plays loud music all the time. Apart from

this

, friends of his who visit him use vulgar language, while talking due to which students residing nearby my

room

got uncomfortable as well. Since my final exams are approaching, so, I can not bear

such

kind

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of things as it is impacting my study

consequently

creating obstacles in building my career. I would be obliged if you change my

room

. Hope you will look

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matter and solve the issue at your earliest. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, 6th January,22 John Smith