Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

Dear Sir, Writing
this
epistle to report an issue that I am currently encountering while sharing a hostel
room
with one of my seniors. My name is John,
First
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,First

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your student in Computer Science department and I am sharing
room
no 201 in hostel no 3 with a final year student of
same
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the same

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stream whose name is Allen. He is creating
a lots
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a lot
lots

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of disturbance to me due to which I find it very hard to stay with him.
Initially
, I thought
this
problem could be mitigated on my own,
however
, now I believe I entail your assistance as now the situation is out of my control and I am feeling
bit
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a bit

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uncomfortable
to stay
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staying

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with him anymore. Every now and
then
, he conducts
party
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a party

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in the
room
itself and invites his multiple friends. Not only party but he plays loud music all the time. Apart from
this
, friends of his who visit him use vulgar language, while talking due to which students residing nearby my
room
got uncomfortable as well. Since my final exams are approaching, so, I can not bear
such
kind
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kinds

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of things as it is impacting my study
consequently
creating obstacles in building my career. I would be obliged if you change my
room
. Hope you will look
the
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into the

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matter and solve the issue at your earliest. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, 6th January,22 John Smith
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