Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many

people

are facing issues related to housing facilities and

traffic

due to

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numbers

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number

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of

companies

are establishing in the

town

. Moving

factories

and large

companies

to the countryside can be the solution to remove

this

problem. I completely agree with the

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statement and reasons, which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. In

this

period of globalisation, many new

companies

and

factories

are getting established in the

town

and to run their businesses many employees are getting hired which is a good sign

opportunities

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for everyone but

this

can be effected on our living

town

. Because many

people

will apply for their employability and start living in cities with their families. And due to these

reasons

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the use of vehicles and housing facilities will be increased enormously. Above mentioned issues can be solved only if

people

move their

firms

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farms

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and

factories

to the countryside where they can get enough land to establish large and well facilitate buildings or

factories

and

also

the employability. By doing

this

, cities can get more spacious, places can get less crowded and

traffic

issues can be reduced. Apart from that, new housing schemes can be constructed which will help many

people

to find

place

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to live who are moving from

small

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town

. To sum up

this

,

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large

companies

and

factories

cover

huge

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a huge

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area

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areas

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of land which can lead

traffic

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and housing problems in cities.

Although

, movie commercial buildings and

factories

to the countryside can be reduced the number of

traffic

and other difficulties.