The production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most severe issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved.

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the potential impact
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harmful
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global heating, and it has become
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controversial subject in recent years. In my opinion, it is time to take
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nature,
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negative effects of global heating along with some remedies to
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this
hazard and
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myriad
of reasons which will
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but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that
gases
such
as carbon dioxide
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by vehicles and manufacturing industries has deadly effects on both aminals as well as humans.
for instance
, these
gases
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imbalance
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in
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, which leads to the oxygen
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deficiency
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all living beings. Another pivotal aspect is that
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forces ice on the mountains and
gllaciers
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glaciers
to melt, which will
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in floods.
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area in the world will be under
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water.
Hence
, it is apparent that why global warming is a serious threat.
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to deal with
this
problem are many, but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical.
Besides
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, if all transportation modes like cars, buses,
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heavy
duty trucks,
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, ships etc would be converted from gas engines to fully electric
then
the volume of carbon dioxide and other unwanted
gases
in climate will lessen. Primarily,
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afforestation
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on overheating of the earth surface. To recapitulate,according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach
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a conclusion that the problem of temperature increase in the atmosphere can be
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, provided that the
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measures are taken.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • atmospheric heating
  • global warming
  • extreme weather events
  • rising sea levels
  • ecosystem disruption
  • heatwaves
  • droughts
  • species extinction
  • economic implications
  • disaster relief
  • tipping points
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon sequestration
  • reforestation
  • afforestation
  • sustainable agriculture
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • international agreements
  • Paris Agreement
  • emissions reduction
  • lifestyle changes
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