Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

#manager #cinema #movie #theatre #jacket #film

Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am Harmandeep Kaur. Yesterday, I forgotten my

jacket

in the theatre when I was coming here to see the

second

show of the Galwakdi 2 movie. Let me explain, my

jacket

was of silver colour and the brand of it was GUCCI. It was a fancy

jacket

and was close to my heart because it was given by my husband to me on my

first

anniversary. It happened on January 8,2022 when I came to your theatre for watching a movie with my bosom friends and I was seating in hall two in the

second

row and my seat number was 50. As I remember I kept my

jacket

on the back of my seat and I thought it was on there or on the floor near my seat. As I said my feelings were attached to it. It's my humble request if you find the sweater with aforementioned description please either you inform me via my telephone number or I will visit here within two days and I will contact you about it. I will look forward to your quick action. Yours sincerely, Harmandeep Kaur

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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moreover
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for example
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however
although
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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

198 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?