''In recent decades, playing computer games has become a popular activity for children of all ages. Many people claim that this hobby offers few benefits beyond entertainment or relaxation and may, in fact, be harmful to a child’s development. Do you agree with this statement? ''

In the modern world nowadays,

computer

games

has

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greatly become popular all over the world, especially for

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young

people

. While many

people

don'

t

think

this

sort of entertainment could bring any

beneficials

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beneficial

to the young generations and some thinks that violent

games

could be harmful to a child's development. But overall

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don'

t

agree with

this

statement. Throwback to the old times when none of us have the access to

smartphone

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or

computer

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computers

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children usually spend their time

on

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watching televisions or

read

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a book and even hanging out with their peers. Since now after few decades passed

people

's entertainment has changed, everything become more

mordern

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modern

and less traditional but it doesn'

t

mean it's a bad thing.

People

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grew up in recent decades they attracted to

computer

games

more than other entertainment activities because it's more enjoyable for them,

specially

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for children cause at

their

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young age they can learn much more than just a game. They can learn plenty of skills from the game

such

as problem-solving, teamwork, or even strategic skills. But in many cases, there's always a good and a bad as long as they're under parent's observation

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because I believe that parents are taking the most important role that can control and choose the right content of

games

for their child. Playing

games

is

also

helps a child to grow healthier. Parents can'

t

always control their kids especially

who

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they meet in school, if we allowed kids to play

computer

games

or video

games

their mindset will change when it comes to making new friends, they will choose a healthier group of friends to hang out and play video

games

together after school rather than being with their bad peers by smoking cigarettes or doing drugs at a young age. But it is said that

computer

games

or video

games

could be addictive to

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young

people

at

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all ages from which they get distracted and ignore important things in their life.

However

, I believe the benefits of

computer

games

bring to us outweigh the drawbacks. Online

games

themselves are not harmful,

thus

how they are used within control to make the best use is the most important.