The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.
The pie charts compare the
percentage
of
energy
which is produced from different types of
resources
in a country in 1985 and 2003. The initial impression is that oil had the highest
percentage
in
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energy
production
among other
resources
both in 1985 and 2003, and hydro had the least
percentage
in that in
aforementioned
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years. As can be seen,
oil
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the oil
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proportion in
energy
production
is 52% and 39% in 1985 and 2003 , respectively .The proportion of
energy
that is
produced by natural gas increased from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003.
This
increasing trend happened for coal too and the proportion of
energy
production
by coal was around triple in 2003 compared to 1985 and it reached from 8 % in 1985 to 22% in 2003.
On the contrary
, the
percentage
of
energy
that was produced by nuclear
resources
had a significant reduction from 22% in 1985 to 8% in 2003.
Energy
production
from hydro
resources
remained unchanged at the level of 4% in both years.
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