you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter 1- Say where you think left the papers 2- explain why they are so important 3- tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Sir/Dame, I am writing
this
letter in need of your help. My name is Mateo Ferro. Yesterday, I went to your hotel for having a meeting in Charlton Hall at 3 pm.
Then
, I had
a
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dinner with my colleagues in a dining room. When I arrived home, I found out that I have lost my reports somewhere at the hotel. I Believe I might
left
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leave
be left

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it in a restroom closely to a dining room. I remembered
,
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I washed my hands after that. I could tell you that
this
report is not only important to me but
also
my
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patients because it is about
a
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research on pediatric cancer that I have done with my patients for 3 years. I would like you to consider helping me to find it and inform me as soon as possible. I really appreciate your help. I look forward to your response. Yours Faithfully, Mateo Ferro
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