Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders. Other think that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your own opion.

Many
people
think that some individuals are naturally good leaders.
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Others
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Other
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Others
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think that
people
can learn
leadership
skills
. Discuss both views and give your own
opion
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opinion
option
. There is an argument about the question
if
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of whether
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a
leader
is born or
create
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. Some
people
and
myself
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will say that there are things
which
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that
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can never be taught, and
leadership
skills
are among them. The others will argue that these
skills
can be learned through methods, academic knowledge and specific situations are the
key
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in order to become a
leader
. On one hand,
leadership
abilities can be learned by books, listening to
people
and in universities. The business management and MBA applications are increasing every year. Currently, courses
such
as
leadership
skills
and how to lead are the most wanted once, because they use teaching methods
such
as study
case
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cases
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, special
guest
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guests
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and proven strategies to
provides
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provide
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knowledge and confidence for students to help them become better leaders. Books are another great example of how
leadership
skills
can be taught.
By
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these books a person can learn from
a successful
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a successful leader idea
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leader
ideas and
expersie
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expertise
which he can copy on himself.
On the other hand
, there is a gap between the practical world and the academic one
,
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and not every skill can be learned, some a person
have
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it or not . If
this
skill can
be learn
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be learned
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, every person in the world would be a
leader
. To be a
leader
is something that
change
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changes
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and it depends on the situation, a
leader
needs to read the
people
to understand what motivated them. Qualities
such
as confidence and
carezma
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charisma
are the main factors in a
leader
and these can not be taught. in my opinion ,
people
can learn practical tools about
leadership
and how to read and motivate others, but they can not be
a
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apply
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good
leader
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leaders
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. As mentioned, the qualities of a
leader
are born and can not be
learn
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learned
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any where
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.
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