Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are different professionalism exist over all the world, where based on the unique skills,availability of workforces,

market

growth rate and capability and important to other segments are the few important factors which determine the workforces payment.Today entertainers basically in the field of film,music and sports have a high pay rate compared to other segments.In my ,opinion

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high payment discipline because of

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reasons. In a highly globalized environment, the entertainment industry is

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biggest industry where billions

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plays in the

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level mostly by the one key players and that unique player became as a face for

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above mentioned segments cannot grow or

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the available opportunities

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fair

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enough to play high figures to

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of dependent business starts to develop based on those high paid

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for the continuation of those business and boost the

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growth it is fair enough to pay

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amount to

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alone one or few

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can't dominate the

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have to depend on other specialized people

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a film star they are many other

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working around it example musicians, directors, assistant directors and editors.

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only film major

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give

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high payment and

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give enough consideration to level staff who have

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so hard to bring up him to that level by performing

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task

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System developers, system programme due to their

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skills and knowledge starts to get high pay even by startup firms. In conclusion, I am brief concluded that due to the

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growth,involvement of billion-dollar of money and become a root

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for the main small business it is acceptable to pay high figures to big

stars

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sometimes it is arguable to give some sort of consideration to other team players who

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to bring

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to people to big

stars

in their respective fields.