People nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people belive that socail skills are more important in addition to good qualification for job success. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

The bar chart illustrates the sectors that
contributes
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to India’s gross domestic
production
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, and their evolution by decades through the period between 1960 and 2000. Overall, it is conspicuous that
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agriculture's contribution to the GDP decreased heavily through the years whilst services saw the biggest progression,
moreover
, the industrial contribution fluctuated through the surveyed years. With regards to the details of the bar graph, we can clearly see that in 1960 agriculture contributed by 60% to the national gross domestic production, decade after decade
this
contribution decreased dramatically, to the point that it was surpassed by services in 1990, in 2000 agriculture was the smallest contributor to India's GDP with approximately 12%. In 1960 services and industry combined contributed up to 20% to the national GDP, their proportion increased through the
further
decades, and in 2000 the tertiary sector produced more than 60% of the production, making
this
sector the biggest contributor, and industry ranked
second
with about 25%.
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