Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

It is often said that boarding

schools

are an excellent

option

for students.

However

, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can

also

be made against the idea.

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essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who argue that boarding

schools

are a better

option

for

children

claim that

children

can easily learn to live

independent

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, and it is the best place to gain academic qualifications. It is well-known that many boarding

schools

have a discipline at the boarding

such

as morning and night routine. Many strict routines and rules teach

children

discipline. For these

reasons

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some people advise that boarding

schools

are

the

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suitable places for

children

to study.

By contrast

, those who argue against

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their

children

at boarding claim that

parents

will lose control over their

children

. They spend most of their time at

schools

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school

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;

therefore

,

parents

will not know what is happening in their

children

’s daily

life

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lives

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.

For example

,

parents

have no way to find

whether

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their

children

are

being

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healthy and whether

focusing

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they should focus

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on their

study

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studies

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by all

side

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in there.

Finally

, there will be

a

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empty distance between

children

and

parents

. It seems that these reasons can be

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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way of raising a child for their family.

Overall

, it appears boarding

schools

can be a better

option

for

children

to learn to be independent.

However

, it is not an excellent

option

because it does not give a chance to

parents

to control their

children

on a daily basis.