Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
It is often said that boarding
schools
are an excellent option
for students. However
, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also
be made against the idea. This
essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who argue that boarding schools
are a better option
for children
claim that children
can easily learn to live independent
, and it is the best place to gain academic qualifications. It is well-known that many boarding Change the word
independently
schools
have a discipline at the boarding such
as morning and night routine. Many strict routines and rules teach children
discipline. For these reasons
some people advise that boarding Add a comma
reasons,
schools
are the
suitable places for Correct article usage
apply
children
to study. By contrast
, those who argue against living
their Verb problem
leaving
children
at boarding claim that parents
will lose control over their children
. They spend most of their time at schools
; Fix the agreement mistake
school
therefore
, parents
will not know what is happening in their children
’s daily life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
For example
, parents
have no way to find whether
their Change preposition
out whether
children
are being
healthy and whether Verb problem
apply
focusing
on their Wrong verb form
they should focus
study
by all Fix the agreement mistake
studies
side
in there. Fix the agreement mistake
sides
Finally
, there will be a
empty distance between Change the article
an
children
and parents
. It seems that these reasons can be unhealthy
way of raising a child for their family. Add an article
an unhealthy
Overall
, it appears boarding schools
can be a better option
for children
to learn to be independent. However
, it is not an excellent option
because it does not give a chance to parents
to control their children
on a daily basis.Submitted by alexstudyin on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion