Question: You are going to another country to study. You would like to do part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, - give details of your study plans - explain why you want to get a part-time job - suggest how your friend could help you find a job
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Actually. Consider adding a comma.
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
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The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,